文/刘宝彩/天津
根据校园生活场景：有的同学抱怨父母期望高、作业多、压力大，要求考生在“我们应该抱怨生活吗”的主题班会上发表看法——让抱怨止步，与生活言和。
英语写作使用英语逻辑思维方法：不靠“模板”靠逻辑，通过“左找原因，右找结果”思路，完成英语作文，以同一内容不同形式，写两篇英语文如下。
第一篇英语作文
No Complaint About Life
Dear classmates,
Many of student in my class feel anxious for their parents’ high expectations weigh on their minds, and for piles of homework leave them little time to listen to classic music for relaxation. These problems are without solution by complaining, in belief.
In my view, constant complaints only trap us in negativity. That means, instead of focusing on what we lack, we should analyze the problem from a new standpoint. For example, parents’ expectations come from their love which helps the students to grow into capable individuals. As is regarded well by a tool, homework turns students favourable for reinforcing knowledge, bringing students to build a solid foundation for the future.
Accordingly, I find it so necessary for action to speak louder than words that, getting burdened with stress, students are expected to talk to their parents calmly to share their feelings, or work out a study plan with classmates to make homework more efficient. Let’s turn pressure into motivation, keeping life much brighter.
中译文:
亲爱的同学们：
我班上很多同学都感到焦虑，因为父母的高期望压在他们心头，还有堆积如山的作业让他们几乎没有时间听古典音乐放松。我认为，抱怨解决不了这些问题。
在我看来，不断抱怨只会让我们陷入消极情绪中。也就是说，我们不应该把注意力放在自己缺少的东西上，而应该从新的角度分析问题。例如，父母的期望源于他们的爱，这种爱能帮助学生成长为有能力的人。作业就像一个好用的工具，能让学生巩固知识，为他们未来打下坚实的基础，这一点是公认的。
因此，我认为行动胜于言语是十分必要的。所以，当学生背负压力时，应该冷静地和父母谈谈，分享自己的感受，或者和同学一起制定学习计划，提高作业效率。让我们把压力转化为动力，让生活更加光明。
第二篇英语作文把
先修正原英语作文，再将生硬表达变得自然，同时加强举例与观点的衔接，使文章更流畅。
No Complaint About Life
Dear classmates,
Many students in my class feel anxious because their parents’ high expectations weigh on their minds, and piles of homework leave them little time to listen to classic music for relaxation. In my opinion, complaining offers no solution to these problems.
In my view, constant complaints only trap us in negativity. Instead of focusing on what we lack, we should analyze the problem from a new perspective. Take parents’ expectations, for example—they stem from love, and this love pushes us to grow into capable individuals. Similarly, homework is not a burden but a helpful tool: it helps us reinforce knowledge and build a solid foundation for the future, which benefits us in the long run.
Therefore, I believe action speaks louder than words. When burdened with stress, students should talk to their parents calmly to share their feelings, or work out a study plan with classmates to make homework more efficient. Let’s turn pressure into motivation and make life brighter.
总结：
《高考英语作文咋才能 把题为“让抱怨止步 与生活言和”写得质优高》本文围绕 “不抱怨生活” 这一主题，指出同学们因父母高期望和繁重作业而焦虑，强调抱怨无济于事，应换角度看待问题，将父母的期望视为爱，把作业当作巩固知识的工具，最后提出通过行动化解压力，把压力转为动力，让生活更美好。
编辑语：
《高考英语作文咋才能 把题为“让抱怨止步 与生活言和”写得质优高》一文阐述：生活中难免有压力与烦恼，抱怨往往是最无效的应对方式。这篇文章以同学们的校园生活为切入点，真诚地呼吁大家换种心态看待问题，用行动去改变现状，颇具现实意义。希望能给正处于迷茫中的同学们带来一些启发，学会在压力中成长，让生活少些抱怨，多些阳光。
从逻辑思维角度点评
文章先提出同学们面临的问题及抱怨无用这一观点，然后从新角度分析问题，解释父母期望和作业的积极意义，最后给出解决问题的行动建议，逻辑链条基本完整。从提出问题到分析问题再到解决问题，层层递进，符合人们的认知逻辑。在分析问题部分，对于 “换角度看问题” 与前面 “抱怨陷入消极” 的衔接紧密些，逻辑过渡自然。
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