北京中考作文真题
假日你是李华，你们学校正在开展“安全月”宣传活动，倡议大家制作关于安全教育的主题海报，你们班交换生Peter给你发邮件询问相关事情。请用英语回复一封邮件，告诉他海报上交的时间，并分享你设计海报的一些想法。
提示词语：design, safety rule, careful, protect, picture
提示问题：when should you hand in the poster?
What would you like to share with Peter about designing the poster?
Dear Peter.
I’m glad to receive your email,_______________________________________________
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If there is anything more that I can help with, please let me know.
Yours’
Li Hua
满分范文诵读：
Dear Peter.
I’m glad to receive your email. You should make it clear that July 10th is the deadline for your handing in the poster.
I also show a strong interest in designing the poster and I can’t wait to share with you some of my ideas. Firstly, it is important that some safety rules should be included in your poster, by which the readers can avoid all kinds of potential danger in life. Secondly, you are advised to remind them of the significance of protecting themselves while meeting emergencies. Thirdly, if you add the necessity of mastering some first aid knowledge, your poster will be more practical. At last, the poster can be more attractive with some related pictures.
If there is anything more that I can help with, please let me know.
Yours’
Li Hua
参考译文：
亲爱的彼得。
我很高兴收到你的电子邮件，你应该明确7月10日是你交海报的截止日期。
我对海报的设计也很感兴趣，我迫不及待地想和你分享我的一些想法。首先，重要的是，你的海报中应该包含一些安全规则，这样读者就可以避免生活中的各种潜在危险。其次，建议你提醒他们在遇到紧急情况时保护自己的重要性。第三，如果你加上一些必需应当熟练掌握的急救知识，你的海报会更实用。最后，通过一些相关的图片，海报会更有吸引力。
如果还有什么我可以帮忙的，请告诉我。
你的
李华
抢分亮点语法、句型、精彩短语，高级词汇解析：
1. You should make it clear that July 10th is the deadline for your handing in the poster.此句中it是形式宾语，代替that引导的从句。
2. show a strong interest in doing 有浓厚的兴趣做某事；can’t wait to do 迫不及待地想做某事，在此处拉动了李华和彼特之间距离。刻画细腻，清新脱俗，亲和力极强。
3. by which the readers can avoid all kinds of potential danger in life.介词+关系代词引导定语从句，而整个句子又是it作为形式主语的主语从句句型，that引导的从句是真正的主语；此高级语法结构运用娴熟，表意准确，令人惊叹。
4. Secondly, you are advised to remind them of the significance of protecting themselves while meeting emergencies.被动语态，在句式上做了变化；while meeting emergencies.是省略了主语的状语从句。
5. Thirdly, if you add the necessity of mastering some first aid knowledge, your poster will be more practical.
这是一个if引导的“主将从现”的条件状语从句的主从复合句。比较委婉得体地表达了作者制作海报的想法。
6. 高级词汇有：avoid ，potential，remind…of，significance等以及连接词：firstly, secondly, thirdly, at last 使文章结构严谨，浑然一体。
